ReapersElysium

I made a goal for myself to finish the third book in my Catalyst series before the end of this year (I've been working on it since 2020) and I managed to make the deadline by a month battling the worst mental and physical health year I've ever had. I've had lots of writers block and long periods where I couldn't write anything, but I'm super excited to have it finally completed! The ass end of it needs some work, but the story is completely flushed out. I'd really appreciate beta readers for the first book (Catalyst). I have the full book posted on Wattpad, you can start reading here: https://www.wattpad.com/1271197306-catalyst-chapter-1 I don't post a lot about my writing or talk a lot about it to people around me, so the only people that typically beta read for me are my mom and sisters. I'd like some feedback from others as well with a non-family bias, lol. I would really REALLY appreciate some feedback on it, even if it's constructive criticism. I'd love to talk about it

Decided to try Wattpad out. My sci-fi/dystopian novel Catalyst has been complete for a little while now, but I want feedback on it and decided Wattpad was the easiest way to go! Any form of support would be fantastic! Feedback would be wonderful! Here's a link to the story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/322554907-catalyst And I'll preview the back of book blurb here too: What if they controlled the water? Dehydration. Death. Dust. "It was all I'd ever known." Alloy Houghton has never known anything else. Years before her time war, sickness, and greed tangled everything into a one-way course for destruction, yet life found a way. Under the maniacal rule of a dictator restricting water to anyone on the outside: she has two options, be who they want her to be or fight the system. In a strange set of events, Alloy is thrown into a world she never knew existed, a so-called rebel organization and a dangerous power threatening everything she ever knew about her existence. She's